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雅思寫作注意事項(xiàng)：避免口語化的短語

一，請避免人話的主語

口語中我們很習(xí)慣用“某個(gè)人做某件事”來構(gòu)成基本句式，以至于議論文中有的考生依然寫的是這樣的句子：

More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life.

上例中第一句的主句和狀語從句中都是以某個(gè)人開始的，第二句中主句和賓語從句也是以人做主語。雖然說這兩個(gè)句子的WPS(每句中的詞匯數(shù))都超過10個(gè)，應(yīng)該說不能算是寫的特別初級的簡單句，如果句法和詞匯沒有問題還是很有希望達(dá)到6分的。但如果全篇都是這樣的句式，整個(gè)文章就顯得幼稚，類似于記敘文寫作，絕對突破不了7分。

其實(shí)改法很簡單：我們只要避免從“某個(gè)人”開始句子就可以了，也就是說用比較客觀的就事論事的態(tài)度。如：避免“學(xué)生出國”，只寫“出國”;避免“他們想要…”，只寫“想要…”。這樣，上面的句子就可以寫成：go abroad to get better education and find a better job in the future,不但很客觀，而且把原來的主句和從句兩部分精簡處理成了一個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語。既可以做謂語動(dòng)詞加上原來的一個(gè)主語構(gòu)成句子，也可以用不定式、動(dòng)名詞和分詞處理為非謂語動(dòng)詞做主語、賓語或者狀語，還可以以從句的形式處理。至于原來第一句中的主語young students可以用介詞短語的形式插入不定式或者動(dòng)名詞短語中，而下面的句子里的評價(jià)部分的內(nèi)容提上來做主句的謂語，組成一個(gè)新的句式。

另外，第二例句中的“have”，一般情況下主語都是某個(gè)人，而在寫作中多為“there be”句型所代替，更加客觀。所以上面的兩個(gè)例句就可以合并成一句：

There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.

這樣合并不但客觀而且精煉，每個(gè)單位句子所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容自然就擴(kuò)大，詞匯密度也相應(yīng)地增多，自然容易得高分，如果加上個(gè)別單詞或短語的替換，就可以達(dá)到7分。但切記不可機(jī)械照搬范文中的長句，從雅思中國網(wǎng)的學(xué)員反饋情況看判為模板的文章最低分?jǐn)?shù)降至4.5.

更進(jìn)一步說，“have”和“there be”句型都可以簡化成更簡單的介詞“with”結(jié)構(gòu)，如以下所示：

On the table is a box. There is a cover beside it.

這兩個(gè)小句子是小作文的流程圖中經(jīng)常要用到的具體描寫事物的句型，凡是描寫具有某種屬性或者帶有某種外部特征都可以用”with”結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)，所以上述兩句可以合并成：On the table is a box with a cover beside it.

除了一般的“某個(gè)人做某件事情”和“…h(huán)ave…”句型，常見的人化主語的句型還有很受考生偏愛的幾個(gè)情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，如can, may, should等。一般建議前兩個(gè)改成It is likely /possible to do/ that….;后一個(gè)改成It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done.的句式，請看下面的例示：

We can go anywhere we like with our bicycle. →

It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle.

To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.→

To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.

歸納起來說，議論文中我們要積極避免“某個(gè)人”做主語，盡量用不定式、動(dòng)名詞或者一個(gè)從句做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用評價(jià)性的動(dòng)詞充當(dāng)，這樣就可以由記敘文性質(zhì)的“過程性句式”順利轉(zhuǎn)化成更符合議論文文風(fēng)的客觀評價(jià)性的句式。

二，多使用被動(dòng)句式

在比較正式的新聞、商務(wù)、法律等英語(論壇)文體中，被動(dòng)句式因?yàn)槠涓怀隹陀^性的賓語或者事實(shí)被廣為使用。雅思的圖表分析和議論文都是比較正式的文體，所以我們也應(yīng)該注意多用被動(dòng)句式。尤其是在以下兩個(gè)方面：

1.主語不確定

Someone murdered the millionaire last night.→

The millionaire was murdered last night.

2. 主語是泛指很多人或者大部分人

To improve the air quality, we should reduce the use of private cars. →

To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.

Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.→

It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.

被動(dòng)句的用法不僅體現(xiàn)在主句中，在從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞短語中都有可能用到，如：

It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. →

It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled.

I don’t expect that she returned. → She is not expected to have returned.

I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. →

I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financially difficult year.

但是因?yàn)闈h語中本來是沒有被動(dòng)句式的，所以受漢化思維的影響很多考生不會想到這一點(diǎn)。這就要求我們對此要引起足夠的重視，并且在平時(shí)多加練習(xí)以培養(yǎng)對其敏感度。

三，注意名詞化句式表達(dá)

寫作中把原本用動(dòng)詞或者形容詞表達(dá)的地方換成名詞叫做名詞化(nominalization)。名詞化是為了避免太多動(dòng)詞造成的句法處理上的困難，同時(shí)也可以把某些陳述型的句式轉(zhuǎn)化成更客觀的評價(jià)句，更符合議論文的文體要求。如：

Our monitor didn’t come today. He has got a flu.

很明顯這兩個(gè)小句可以用因果關(guān)系的信號詞連成一句：Because our monitor has a flu, he didn’t come today.，但這個(gè)because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句以及其它的狀語從句是考生們很常用的復(fù)合句，雖然看似比較復(fù)雜，其實(shí)仍然是某個(gè)人做主語。如果非謂語動(dòng)詞掌握得好，可能我們會想到用Having a flu, our monitor didn’t come today.如果我們把前后兩部分分別用一個(gè)概括性的名詞來替代，中間加上我們熟悉的表示因果關(guān)系的動(dòng)詞，這個(gè)句子就非常符合議論文的風(fēng)格：The flu caused the absence of our monitor today.或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness.至少我們可以盡量將其中的一個(gè)小句變成名詞，減少某個(gè)人做主語的口語化句式的出現(xiàn)頻率。

雖然這種表達(dá)方法更為客觀，句式上更加簡潔，但是用比較抽象的概括性詞匯來寫句子對于越來越趨于低齡化的考生來說的確是個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)。但是有一些單詞是我們在寫作中幾乎必須要用到的，平時(shí)要備好以下幾個(gè)常見的名詞化：lack of(if there is no…), ignorance of (don’t know …), illiteracy in(can’t read…/ can’t use…), failure (didn’t do…)等。而且在具體的使用過程中可以結(jié)合介詞with使用，使得句法更加凝練。此外個(gè)別單詞也可以利用題目中的動(dòng)詞的名詞性后綴如： -tion，-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者變成動(dòng)名詞形式-ing。如：

More younger generations celebrate the western festivals→the celebration of the western festivals by more younger generations

四，避免其他口語化表達(dá)

如more and more/ a lot等口語化的短語盡量避免，可以用increasing(ly)， a large number of…/a great deal of…./swarms of…等代替。此外縮略形式也是正式的寫作中要避免的。

雅思寫作大作文范文：兒童廣告

雅思寫作大作文題目講解

此次大作文考察的是廣告類話題，這一類agree/disagree題型不屬于二元對立題，而是出現(xiàn)了極端表達(dá) “should be banned”。那么針對這種題型的寫法，我們一般是打“極端表達(dá)”這個(gè)店。比如此題我們的寫作思路就可以整理成為：一些廣告缺失存在負(fù)面效應(yīng)，如虛假廣告或者一些傳播負(fù)面思想或行為的廣告，但是并不能因?yàn)檫@一部分廣告的存在就否定整個(gè)廣告產(chǎn)業(yè)，我們需要做的是如何有效地去監(jiān)管以及規(guī)制這些廣告。另外，審題時(shí)還要注意的一點(diǎn)就是題目中所關(guān)注的人群，即小孩。那么針對小孩這個(gè)群體，他們有一些自身的特點(diǎn)，如自身發(fā)展不成熟，易受影響等。

雅思寫作大作文參考范文

Advertising has been considered as an effective way to boost the sales of advertised products, which is widely used in diverse areas. However, some side effects produced by the advertisements especially those directed at children have aroused the concern among the public. From my perspective, these advertisements should be strictly regulated rather than banned.

It is undeniable that advertisements can inform consumers about new products and services, which helps children and parents make informed choices. The advertising campaigns not only allow consumers to get to know a variety of alternative goods, but also the distinctive features of each brand, hence children or their parents can make a comparison of those products and purchase the ones in need. Apart from that, advertising is an important source of entertainment which gives children a lot of fun. As many advertisements shown on TV are both educational and attractive to children, they can gain many benefits while watching. For example, those funny cartoon characters can teach children to dance or sing.

On the other hand, some negative influences should also be taken into consideration. Due to the fact that children have not developed physically and mentally to a full extent, they can be easily swayed by advertising. If the advertisements contain some misleading information, children may not have the ability to distinguish right from wrong, and consider the information or the specific action to be acceptable. Meanwhile, some of the advertisements can be deceptive. In order to pursue profits to a larger extent, some companies may deliberately exaggerate the advantages of their products and hide those potential risks. As a result, children may pester their parents to buy these products which turn out to be not exactly the same.

To summarize, children-aimed advertisements can bring both positive and negative effects. Instead of banning them, the government can attach tighter regulations in the procedure of examination and approval. At the same time, parents should take the responsibility of guiding children when the false advertisements occur.

總之，針對廣告的兒童可以帶來正面和負(fù)面的影響。政府在審批過程中，不加禁止，可以嚴(yán)格規(guī)定。同時(shí)，當(dāng)虛假廣告發(fā)生時(shí)，家長要負(fù)起引導(dǎo)孩子的責(zé)任。

雅思寫作大作文范文：婦女產(chǎn)假

雅思寫作大作文題目講解

正方段1：產(chǎn)假可以讓婦女得到一定時(shí)間的休息，可以恢復(fù)身體，因?yàn)樯⒆訒r(shí)很累的。

正方段2：產(chǎn)假可以讓媽媽和孩子相處一段時(shí)間，有利于最初家庭和睦氣氛的培養(yǎng)。

讓步段：說有些女性在工作中的地位很重要，她們休假會對公司造成一定的經(jīng)濟(jì)損失。

雅思寫作大作文參考范文

Being a mother is a milestone for many women in the course of life, which leans that the long term nurturing and caring of the unborn babies finally bear fruit. Though I am not a feminist, I suppose it is very necessary for female to take a maternity leave in the wake of delivery.

Being temporarily off work means the newly mothers can have a time to recover from their delivery. The birth of a baby indicates the painstaking care from his/her mother, which is quite arduous and energy-consuming. With the maternity leave, mothers can enjoy the professional health care in some well-equipped hospitals or be soundly taken care of by their family, guaranteeing that they can recuperate from this strenuous process soon and immune from some adverse health impacts.

Besides, the maternity leave can also make it possible that father, mother and the newly-born baby share good quality family time. The birth of the baby means the completion of a new family and every member of the family is indispensable during this time. If women are deprived of the maternity leave , not only their babies cannot be taken care of, but also it leaves an emotional isolation, thereby making the family less closely-knit.

There are, of course, some problems for women to take maternity leave. The elevation of female status and their competitiveness in the workplace render them to be irreplaceable to some extent. Although the maternity leave is not long, it is still likely to bring about the managerial problems to the companies and organizations where they work.

In conclusion, the disadvantages pale into insignificance when compared with the bright sides of maternity leave. Women are supposed to be given maternity leave and this is beneficial to their family life and personal physical fitness.

總之，相比于好處，產(chǎn)假的缺點(diǎn)小巫見大巫。婦女應(yīng)該享受產(chǎn)假，這對她們的家庭生活和個(gè)人身體健康都是有益的。